How I Built This: Structuring We Have Seen His Star in the East

I was writing the Quick and Dirty Cheatsheet to Outlining a Church Production (clunky working title of a post coming soon!) and I’ll be honest…

The templates looked too easy. 

They were boring. 

Someone could look it over and be like “so basic – this is useless”.

So I took a detour which ended up being this post. Here’s how I explain how a super-simple concept became a structured program with just a little thought, structuring, and layers. It’s about the very first script I ever put together and produced – We Have Seen His Star in the East.

At its core, it’s an incredibly simple concept. It became special by adding layers of detail and maintaining both a strong consistency and a good pacing. 

Let’s dive into it.

The initial concept:

I wanted to build a Christmas Eve service around the three gifts of the Magi.

  • Frankincense for a Deity
  • Gold for a King
  • Myrrh for a Savior

One other thing that was important to me was incorporating two of my absolute favorite Christmas hymns: “O Come, O Come Emmanuel” and “We Three Kings”. I had noticed that there are some parallels in the stanzas. Since they’re written in the same musical key in my church’s hymnal, I had the idea to go straight from the verse of one song to the parallel in the other song – prophecy and fulfilment, if you will.

What I was working with:

Our church had done primarily simple “sermons with singing and maybe special music” Christmas programs in the years and decades prior.  I had to maintain a simplicity in production style to fit in that culture.

Also, we keep the Christmas Eve service under an hour, and about 10 minutes of that closing with candlelighting and “Silent Night” which definitely wasn’t going anywhere anytime soon. Adding in an opening and one congregational hymn, and I had about 45 minutes to work with. 

For my personality type, starting with listing known boundaries (event, culture, length, initial concept, etc.) is really helpful. Instead of looking at an unknown empty space that I have to fill with amazing truth, music and words, I can break it down into chunks then attack them individually. 

Breaking it down

Our first boundary: time and generic concept. 45 minutes-ish and three sections.  

15 minutes per section (yay! Math that I can do).

Let’s plan to have a few minutes at the beginning and end for some sort of opening and conclusion. I don’t have to think what they are at this point, just mark that time allotment and move on. We’ll cut out 3 minutes from each section and leave them in that unknown pile. (All of these budgets can flex and change; this is just getting us rolling).

12 minutes per section. 

What I want to include:

A few mini devotionals (less scriptwriting for me which was a wise choice for my experience level), the two hymns, some special music and also Scripture readings.

I wanted similar content types in each section for parallelism, so I might as well create a pattern for each section and check the realistic time expectations:

  • Hymns (“O Come, O Come Emmanuel” & “We Three Kings”) = 1:30 minutes
  • Devotional = 5 minutes
  • Special Music (solo or duet) = 3-4 minutes
  • Scripture reading = as needed both for storytelling and for time

***Yes: I timed the special music and also sang the hymns at normal speed, under my breath, in a coffee shop, with a timer running***

New outline

Intro

Section 1: Frankincense for a Deity

  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Special Music

Section 2: Gold for a King

  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Special Music

Section 3: Myrrh for a Savior

  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Special Music

Closing

It’s simple, it’s solid. There is consistency and an intentionality with the layers within each section. While most attendees won’t consciously notice the structure and the level of thought you’re putting into it – the quality is there.

Consistency with variety:

While each section had hymns-devotional-special-music in that order, I broke each section up with Scripture readings a bit differently. 

While the purpose of the program was explaining elements of Jesus’ character via the devotionals, it was important to include prophecies, doctrine, and the Christmas narrative also. So I inserted Scripture readings where they best fit the flow of the program, rather than in a set pattern:

Section 1: Frankincense for a Deity

  • Scripture Reading 
  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Special Music
  • Scripture Reading 

Section 2: Gold for a King

  • Scripture Reading
  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Special Music

Section 3: Myrrh for a Savior

  • Scripture Reading
  • Hymn combo
  • Devotional
  • Scripture Reading
  • Special Music

Now, the program that the congregation was given listed out the names of the speakers and the names of the special music. The rest was in the scripts held by the ensemble. Thus no one without a script was 100% sure when one section exactly ended and another began until they hit those milestones. That way, the program was both (1) seamless and (2) just a touch unpredictable – which is exactly what we want.

Also, mixing up the who-does-what gave some structural variety. The same group of a dozen people did all the readings, ensemble hymn singing, special music, and some of the piano & violin accompaniment. 

We mixed and matched throughout so everyone had multiple tasks: one person played piano in one section, narrated Scripture off and on throughout, and sang in a duet also.  They sat in chairs on the platform for ease of transition – at any given moment it could be two, or four, or the whole ensemble standing at the row of mics. (Yes, we planned the sitting and standing too – intentionality in all things!)

We created a tight team for ease of rehearsal and communication for these sections, then three completely different people presented the three devotionals. 

Intro and conclusion:

A favorite Magi-themed song of mine is “One King” by Point of Grace. I felt that it would compete with a different song I had in mind that was a shoe-in for the closing special music. So I decided to use just the opening of “One King” to set the scene in the prologue:

“Kings of earth 
On a course unknown
Bearing gifts from afar
Hoping, praying
Following yonder star

Silhouette of a caravan
Painted against the sky
Wise Men searching
For the Holy Child”

The epilogue was also short – a set of original and Scripture readings – and wrapped all the themes together. 

In summary

When you’re preparing a new program from scratch,

  • Outline your boundaries & requirements
  • Have a theme that you are excited about (not sure? Check out 15 separate concepts outlined here)
  • Create a base structure – it’s okay if it’s really simple!
  • Assign a flexible timeframe to each main section
  • Add layers of parallelism and repetition from section to section
  • Include a bit of variety
  • Work on filling out each section 

And voila! You’re on your way to a thoughtful, well-structured production!

Working on your own Christmas Eve script?

Be sure to visit the Production Guide and also Brainstorm Central, where I give you 15 separate concepts and over 40 different elements you can include in your production!

How iorganizedthat.com began

I’m Tiffany and I’m thrilled you’re here! Over the last five years, I’ve written and directed three Christmas productions – it’s quite the project to take something from concept to cantata but the end result is so worth it.

When I first had an idea for a Christmas Eve service back in 2014, I spent a LOT of time Googling for help and resources… BUT everything I found seemed to be either really intense and all-out full-choir, full-costume productions, or kinda cheesy kid-based programs.

I didn’t want to do that.

So I wrote my own.

I’ve now directed three Christmas Eve services at my own church. I’ve also written a Good Friday cantata script and a one-woman show on the life of Queen Esther.

For each production, I spent so many Saturday afternoons in coffee shops huddled over a laptop, researching music, tweaking song lyrics, brainstorming creative effects to highlight key dramatic moments, Googling that one passage of Scripture whose reference I couldn’t remember, and poking and prodding the script to turn it into something both creative and God-glorifying.

And I’ve learned a lot through the process.

So I figured I’d break it down and try to make it as easy as possible for someone else.

Someone like you perhaps.

This site is dedicated to providing all the guides and resources you’ll need to take your idea and make it reality, whether you’re writing your own script or purchasing one.

If you’ve been asked to direct your church’s Christmas production or you’re putting together a special service, you’ve been given a challenge. And I’m here to help. I’ll show you how you can put together a meaningful, beautiful, dynamic, worshipful and unique service.